Thursday, May 31, 2007

Eclipse

While I was playing at my forest,

Mourns of the swallows eclipse my happiness.

While I was dreaming,

Shadows of yours mess up my logical thinking.

Perhaps ...

My damned day were eclipse by you.

 

One, two, three .....

Let my imagination born in free.

 

four, five, six ...

My sins can be never fixed.

Jasmine is the flower I forget to kiss.

 

In the end,

My lack of awareness eclipse my existence.

(bs)

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4 comments:

  1. sin paukMay 31, 2007 at 9:17 AM

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    breathtaking poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    jaw-dropping moment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    U R AN INCREDIBLE POET!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :O

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  2. b sJune 1, 2007 at 5:55 AM

    :D
    U make me happy :P
    I'm on cloud no: 9
    love ya :)

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  3. pu maJune 1, 2007 at 9:14 AM

    :-)

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  4. b sJune 4, 2007 at 5:15 AM

    Thx so much 4 ur encouragements
    Love u guys
    Muwahhhh
    ;P

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