ေဆာင္းရင္ကြဲရဲ့ မနက္မွာ
ေမာဟမႈန္မႈန္ေတြ သယ္ပိုးရင္း
စိတ္စာရြက္မွာ ကဗ်ာတစ္ပုဒ္ေရးခဲ့ဖူးတယ္။
အစည္းအေႏွာင္မရွိတဲ့
စိတ္ရဲ့ေဘာင္မွာ
သူ႔အေၾကာင္းေတြျပည့္ေနခဲ့တယ္။
တေလာကလံုး ၀င္းလင္းေနေပမယ့္
ကိုယ္တစ္ေယာက္တည္း
အေမွာင္တိုက္သြင္းခံရခ်ိန္ေတြ . . .
အႏၶေတြ ျခံဳခိုတိုက္လုိ႔
စကားလံုးေတြ အလဲလဲအၿပိဳၿပိဳ။
ပန္းေတြကို ေလာင္စာလုပ္ၿပီး
အိပ္မက္ေတြ တစ္ေလွႀကီးကို
မီးေလာင္တိုက္သြင္းၾကည့္ဖူးတယ္။
မရွိျခင္းေတြမ်ား ခ်မ္းသာလာမလားလို႔။
ဘယ္အရပ္က ၾကည့္ၾကည့္
ကိုယ့္ကိုယ္ကို ဘယ္တုန္းကမွ မေတြ႔ခဲ့ဘူး။
ဘယ္တုန္းကမွ မရွိခဲ့တာ။
စိတ္ကူးေတြ ကေယာက္ကယက္နဲ႔
ကိုယ့္ကမၻာမွာ
ကိုယ္တစ္ေယာက္တည္းနဲ႔ရႈပ္ေထြးေနခဲ့ . . . . .
ကဗ်ာမွာ စိုက္ပ်ိဳးခဲ့တဲ့
အၾကည့္အျပံဳးတစ္စံုကို
အျပင္မွာ တကယ္ေတြ႔ရတဲ့ေန႔ . . .
ေသမေလာက္ခံစားရတယ္ ။ ။
(bs)
Rememberance for 19 December 2008, Among the clouds.
Just a Poem . . . Just a Poem . . . Yes, everything was (will be) just a POEM !
just a poem?
ReplyDeleteno feeling in it?
or a poem with a feeling in it?
sometimes i wish i can write poems like u.
i can feel all ur beautiful poems....
i can feel U in all ur poems......
ur poems r so gentle, polite, and dreamy....
i tried.
but i can never write one like u....
u r probably forgetting that i m waiting for ur poem book.
busy?
it's ok.
lol
ei
just a poem?
ReplyDeleteno feeling in it?
or a poem with a feeling in it?
sometimes i wish i can write poems like u.
i can feel all ur beautiful words....
i can feel U in all ur poems......
ur poems r so gentle, polite, and dreamy....
i tried.
but i can never write one like u....
u r probably forgetting that i m waiting for ur poem book.
busy?
it's ok.
lol
ei
Ei,
ReplyDeleteI'm now trying to make a PoEm book . . . . Trust me . . .
Just for you . . . .
I wonder why you don't trust me . . .
Come on Ei
I'll be free for U, my beloved friend.
There is no one like u in my whole life Ei, someone who knows me very well, someone who understand me beyond words, someone who could share every dream with me, that special someone . . . . . oNLy you are my closet friend my lit' elephant :)
love you my fella !
bs
:P
ReplyDeleter u sure it's just a poem with a special date (19-Dec-08)???
here same with Ei
I also wanna write the poems like u
I can't write even a beautiful poem & beautiful words
Sometime I wanna explore my feelings as the words
But I can't
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ငါ လဲ နင္႔ လို အ ၇ာ ၇ာ တို င္း ကို က ဗ်ာ ေတြ အ ျဖစ္ ေ ျပာ င္း လဲ ျပီး
ReplyDelete၇ ခဲ့ တဲ့ ခါး သီး ေလာင္ ျမိဳက္ မွု ေတြ ၊ ျဖစ္ တည္ မွု အား လံုး အား လံုး ကို
က ဗ်ာ အ ျဖစ္ နဲ ့ ပဲ သ ေဘာ ထား ႀကည္ ့ ခ်င္ တယ္ ၊၊
:)
ReplyDeleteI have nothing to say. Because your friends above already told my comments. I think it is not just a poem. The fragrance of love, the fragrance of feeling is embedded in your poem. Please write more myanmar poems,sis. Coz, I'm not good in English and Myanmar poems can give your feelings more easily to your audience.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot bro ! i will.
ReplyDelete