Actually, the very first poem was in a piece of paper and I couldn't find it back 'cos I was so lit' @ dat time :D + being blamed by mom for writing poem :D
This one was written down in my very first poem book, the book I get as my bd present from my best friend :P
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All I have is
nothingness
only
I rich
only with
Dearth
I own
just
losses
I meet
only with
missing
What I am is
Being loved
with hate.
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woow, sis ka a sa ka tae phlo tway nae sa khae tar koee.
ReplyDeletedi poem yay phit twar tae a kyaung ka yaw? hee hee ngar ka lae a may a myan ka htu lite tar, MWD snap shot kya nay dar bae.
very nice poem,sis.nge nge lay nae di laut yay tat tal naw. a khu yay tae poem tway nae tot shin lo ma ya woo pot. sis ka a khu elite phit twar pi bae har. thank you so much,sis. sis ka tayar tha baw tway taw taw yay tal naw.
I like it,sis. really.
:) :) :)
I prefer ur burmese poem.
ReplyDeletesis hand writing ka kya naw htet a myar gyee po hla tal. kya naw HW hla lar ma hla lar tot ma nyein thar may kyi, hee hee
ReplyDelete:D
heee hee :D
ReplyDeleteEveryone told me so :D :D
Thanks a lot bro
ReplyDeleteyeah,
တကယ္ေတာ့ အစ္မက အခ်စ္ကဗ်ာ အီအီေတြဆို လံုး၀မၾကိဳက္တာ။
ေနာက္ပိုင္းမွ အဲလို ဆန္ဆန္ေတြ ေရးျဖစ္လာတယ္။
အစက အခ်စ္ကဗ်ာဆန္ဆန္ေတြေတာ့ေရးတယ္ ဒါေပမယ့္ အသည္းကြဲပံုစံေတြပဲ ထြက္လာတယ္ဟ။ မရဘူး။ :D :D
ahh hey, i know ur hand writing is so nice 'cos i've seen in your poem :D come on !!! mine is quite childish and ugly :D
ReplyDeletehee hee, ma hote tar,
ReplyDeletekya naw ka lat yay ta arr so tar, ngae nge tone ka so kha na kha na a yite khan ya tal
:D
sayar won lat yay lay , hee hee
ReplyDelete:P
when did u write that poem?
ReplyDeleteHell! it's neat!
lately u ve been composing a lot about love though.
r u in love?
i doubt!
I started writing it as lately you gave me dat book :P
ReplyDeleteYeah, I doubt myself too :D :D
i know..
ReplyDeleteu hate my love poems...right?
haa haa :D
ReplyDeleteSure, and I also told u naw :D
so good sis.. :')
ReplyDeletevery nice poem sis .. :')
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