Thursday, July 30, 2009

My First Poem




Actually, the very first poem was in a piece of paper and I couldn't find it back 'cos I was so lit' @ dat time :D + being blamed by mom for writing poem :D

This one was written down in my very first poem book, the book I get as my bd present from my best friend :P

xxxxxxx

All I have is
nothingness
only

I rich
only with
Dearth

I own
just
losses

I meet
only with
missing

What I am is
Being loved
with hate.

bs
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  1. Yan Naing AungJuly 30, 2009 at 11:05 PM

    woow, sis ka a sa ka tae phlo tway nae sa khae tar koee.
    di poem yay phit twar tae a kyaung ka yaw? hee hee ngar ka lae a may a myan ka htu lite tar, MWD snap shot kya nay dar bae.
    very nice poem,sis.nge nge lay nae di laut yay tat tal naw. a khu yay tae poem tway nae tot shin lo ma ya woo pot. sis ka a khu elite phit twar pi bae har. thank you so much,sis. sis ka tayar tha baw tway taw taw yay tal naw.
    I like it,sis. really.
    :) :) :)

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  2. myint myatJuly 30, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    I prefer ur burmese poem.

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  3. Yan Naing AungJuly 30, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    sis hand writing ka kya naw htet a myar gyee po hla tal. kya naw HW hla lar ma hla lar tot ma nyein thar may kyi, hee hee
    :D

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  4. b sJuly 30, 2009 at 11:15 PM

    heee hee :D
    Everyone told me so :D :D

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  5. b sJuly 30, 2009 at 11:18 PM

    Thanks a lot bro
    yeah,
    တကယ္ေတာ့ အစ္မက အခ်စ္ကဗ်ာ အီအီေတြဆို လံုး၀မၾကိဳက္တာ။
    ေနာက္ပိုင္းမွ အဲလို ဆန္ဆန္ေတြ ေရးျဖစ္လာတယ္။
    အစက အခ်စ္ကဗ်ာဆန္ဆန္ေတြေတာ့ေရးတယ္ ဒါေပမယ့္ အသည္းကြဲပံုစံေတြပဲ ထြက္လာတယ္ဟ။ မရဘူး။ :D :D

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  6. b sJuly 30, 2009 at 11:19 PM

    ahh hey, i know ur hand writing is so nice 'cos i've seen in your poem :D come on !!! mine is quite childish and ugly :D

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  7. Yan Naing AungJuly 30, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    hee hee, ma hote tar,
    kya naw ka lat yay ta arr so tar, ngae nge tone ka so kha na kha na a yite khan ya tal
    :D

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  8. Yan Naing AungJuly 30, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    sayar won lat yay lay , hee hee
    :P

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  9. sin paukJuly 31, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    when did u write that poem?
    Hell! it's neat!
    lately u ve been composing a lot about love though.
    r u in love?
    i doubt!

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  10. b sJuly 31, 2009 at 8:33 PM

    I started writing it as lately you gave me dat book :P
    Yeah, I doubt myself too :D :D

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  11. sin paukAugust 15, 2009 at 10:16 PM

    i know..
    u hate my love poems...right?

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  12. b sAugust 16, 2009 at 2:04 AM

    haa haa :D
    Sure, and I also told u naw :D

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  13. Wai WaiFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    so good sis.. :')

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  14. Wai WaiFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    very nice poem sis .. :')

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